Assessment 10th October 2011 JIN

Tom
Have you attempted to catch up on some research posts of your blog?
There are lots of good visuals here- sometime I think you could do more to really hit Level 4.
Continue to experiment technology and use http://www.screencast-o-matic.com/   or scribd again for responses.
I still need to see Posts 9 to 11 your application of theory to videos from your genre.
Post 12 Low Budget Ideas- you have visuals but no analysis?
Post 13 Genre Mood Board- this is visual but not really sufficient analysis.
Post 15 Conventions of Your Genre?
Post 18- Adverts - have you evaluated any?

There is actually a lot of work still to be done here. I will be expecting to see these posts completed ASAP.

For you to get a really high coursework grade we need to see:
Lots of images posted in innovative ways
Detailed analysis using Media Language.

Overall your progress is still IMPROVEMENT needed. Lets get to Level 3 please- Very Good- I know you can do this Tom as some of your planning looks great. Use the same techniques to get Research up to date.

JIN