Assessment 2nd October (Research)

Tom,
WWW
The majority of posts for research have been attempted. Genre is more developed than the other areas and you do show some insightful knowledge. Most posts have some visual element. This needs to be expanded as otherwise your blog is very samey. Use JING or scribd or even video montage to really try to hit your target which is a L4.
EBI
Lots of posts are patchy and need visual development or application such as the theory posts 9-11. You have not uploaded any posts on audience research 19 & 20. This is disappointing.
Therefore for this assessment you have gained only a Poor with IMPROVEMENT NEEDED.
Please ensure you are up to date and have developed all posts to your target.
You have until Friday 7th October.
JIN