On this version of the advert I have added the publisher as well as the record company that the artist belongs to which is part of the conventions of a publicity advert. I have also added a drop shadow to the text which makes it stand out from the background as before it was not as clear so the audience struggled to see and read the text so hopefully it is easier to read now. I also changed the layout of the text by making 'Jay' larger than in previous drafts which makes it eye catching and recognisable to the audience and fans as his career progresses.
I also made the text less centralised as the audience feedback I received was that they didn't like the fact it was all central as they felt that it didn't go with the genre.
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